you stand, on a glistening rock
desperately far from shore.
hurtling waves
thrust their power
like a hungry minatour.
in our little boat, we scream
and shout to you –
we jump and wave and bellow
but the ocean wants you too.
you edge towards the water
with a trembling dread
its mighty thrashing beckons you
to even closer tread.
we are here, we are here,
you may not see us
but we’re here,
hidden by the spray,
we are not far away.
oceans rage between us
yet our little boat ploughs through.
it may be shrouded in the foam
but we are coming after you.
Wonderful Lois.
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thanks Jasper!
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Through all the tension you give a sense of hope …
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thank you… that is the aim. thanks for reading!
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You build incredible tension in this piece. Beautifully rendered.
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lovely Christine… thankyou!
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I can relate to this-how sad to try to reach out to someone who is being pulled away. much love
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it’s the feeling helpless that I cannot bear… thank you as always
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Loved the imagery you portrayed with this piece.
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Fabulous. I love the ending. It’s like a reversal of the situation. The ocean is coming for your friend but you are coming for your friend. lovely!
Love the minotaur reference too!
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